It's so hard to lose the one you love
To finally have to say goodbye...
You try to be strong
but the pain keeps holding on...
And all that you can do is cry
Deep within your heart you know
it's time to move on
When the fairy tale that you once knew is gone...
When the last tear drop falls
I'll still be holding on...
to all of our memories
And all of what used to be...
amazing hai...keep it up...nice start....
ReplyDeletevery few people express their feelings & emotions like this in a very simple words but full of true & lovely feelings for ther companions.
ReplyDeletelet that last tear fall off ur eyes,
ReplyDeleteelse there will be no space 4 anyone
2 live in....
u hav portrayed it so wel dat it touched ma heart.all i can say is u hav to go on..wid tim u realize dat new memories r making der space n old ones r taking bak space.dey cant b completly removed..n dey shdnt b as evrythn happens fr a reason,good or bad.they makes us strong...just wash away ur tears coz dey only makes us weak.if somebody is worth ur tears believe me he wil nvr mak u cry..god bls u n i hop dat best wil com ur way..b as u r just da way u r.dnt ever change urself fr some1.always help ppl as u do n bring smiles to faces coz vry fw has dis abilty...lv u loads
ReplyDeletethank u so muchh gals....!
ReplyDeletem lucky to hav u by my side... luv u too...:-)
dis poem truly has got life in it...u've created a feeling!
ReplyDeleteThanks Richa......
ReplyDeleteur comments meant a lot... :-)