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Monday, December 28, 2009

TRANCE...


"He got hit by a car! He’s in the hospital right now."…. and I broke down.
The next minute, I was driving ever so speedily and overtaking cars like there was no tomorrow. The zigzagged road of course had a lot of blind curves. Accelerating more speed, swerving, and slamming, managing to squeeze into the tiny distances between the vehicles, I reached the hospital. To my surprise, I did not find anyone there. Furiously, I called up a friend and enquired about him. “He has reached home and is waiting for you”, she said.
When I reached home, all I could see and hear was darkness and dead silence. I made way towards the entrance porch and then to my living room. The moment I entered, there was a big surprise waiting to wipe off my tears. I saw him standing just in the middle of hundreds of blazing candles, aromatic bouquets and adulation. There could not have been a better birthday present than to see him healthy and firm in front of me. My arms reaching for him, and eyes pouring out mourn, I hugged him…..
….We walked in silence to the park. The sky was gray and it was beginning to get a little cold. I shivered. I tilted my head up towards the sky, it was raining. His closeness was making it hard for me to think. His breath felt cool against my skin. He caressed my cheek and his hand felt nice and warm….. "You’re beautiful" … he said. ……I felt alive again.

3 comments:

  1. I dont have words to say. Its unbelievable for me that its you who worte this and the words are very touchy and each word have its different meaning. Very good and keep on writting and u can rite more good and touchy Blogs in Future.

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  2. thanku so much for respecting my words which i said yesterday, i already said that u are agreat writer & now u can see the respons.Atfer this, i think, u should be more confident & also believe in ur writing. so keep writing, my best wishes & comments will always be with u.

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  3. v all luv surprises (barring someone who jus crossed my thoughts :P), but is it a healthy surprise what u'v described above?? i'd personally hate such a thing happening to me.. a surprise after moments of hysteria!!
    next, i'd luv to read you more, preferably some non-touchy and jolly mood dear!
    doesnt feel good to see you so dismal :):)

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